The Fruit of Glory
By Nora G. (5th grade, El Cerrito, CA), and Bunny S. (3rd grade, Sacramento, CA)
There once was a dog who ate the
fruit of glory that lay in
the fog
It was as sour as an
apple but as sweet as sugar
It was as soft as snow but
as hard as metal
It had a white misty glow
The fruit shook as the dog read
his book and
And with all that power it was
the end of the dog
Hi Nora & Bunny, I love how you made this poem on that funky old manual typewriter at Old Albion School. What a great time! I miss you guys already!
Great descriptions in your writing. I would almost see what you were writing about in my head. I hope to see more of your writing soon. Did you do your own artwork too?
I love your picture of the fruit of glory I also love the poem!!